Five of Hearts: Amiaivel


Five of Hearts featuring a Barn Swallow, with the letter R and a castle turret

Once upon a time a queen was blessed with twin sons, which she named Nosch and Amiaivel.

Nosch fought his way out of the womb a few minutes ahead of Amiaivel, and thus thought himself the eldest. He knew that this meant he would become king, so he always demanded too many entitlements, and looked upon his twin as a slave. Amiaivel had a kind soul, and could not allow himself to deny his own twin’s demands. But the wise queen saw this, and as she began to get old, she announced to the people that Amiaivel would become king when she died.

Nosch was incensed that the second twin would steal his position, so he called upon a witch to cast a spell upon Amiaivel. The spell made Amiaivel, his fiancée Bella, and his maids into toads, and locked them in a dungeon beneath the vegetable patch.

Much time passed, and Amiaivel contented himself with talking and singing to his toad maidens. One day, a pixie floated in on a golden plume.

“Soon, the son of King Nosch will come to see you,” said the pixie. “He will demand the most beautiful shawl in existence. If you give him the one that the elves gave Bella as an engagement gift, then you will soon become human again, and be let back into the palace.”

As soon as the pixie had left, a young man descended into the toads’ dungeon.

“Excuse me, good toad,” he said. “I am Tais, the son of King Nosch. I seek the most beautiful shawl in existence. Can you help me?”

Though it pained him to give away such a valued keepsake, Amiaivel asked one of his maids to give it to him, and said, “This is the most beautiful shawl in existence, and one of my most valued posessions. Take it. I wish you good luck.”

Tais thanked him and left. By and by, the pixie came back.

“I must again ask a good deed,” she said. “The king’s son will come back seeking the most beautiful jewel in existence. If you give him Bella’s engagement band, then you will soon become human again, and be let back into the palace.”

In no time, the young man came back. “I am most unhappy to have to annoy you again, but I must find the most beautiful jewel in existence. Can you help me?”

Amiaivel hesitated to give up the symbol of his and Bella’s love, but knowing that the love itself would not lessen, he gave Tais the engagement band. “On this band is mounted the most beautiful jewel in existence, and one of my most valued posessions. Take it. I wish you good luck.”

Amiaivel sat glumly in his dull dungeon, awaiting the pixie. She fell into the jail with a potato plucked out of the soil above. “I can not yet fulfil my pledge, I must yet again ask you to give up something you love,” she said.

“I have nothing left to give. Make me human, I beg you!”

The pixie paid no attention to his plea. “This is a magic potato. If you put a lady toad in it, she will become human,” she announced. “When the king’s son comes to see you next time, he will need the most beautiful maiden in existence. Let Bella climb into the potato and leave with him, and you will soon become human again, and be let back into the palace.”

In a little while, Tais came to visit. “Again, I am most apologetic to ask an act of kindness. But I must fetch the king the most beautiful maiden in existence. Can you help me?”

Amiaivel had lost too much to his hateful twin, and could not give his fiancée to him as well. He gave the potato to Tais and showed him Puzchunza, his most beautiful housemaid. “Hollow out the potato and put this toad in it. The toad will become the most beautiful maiden in existence, and the one that I love the most. Take the maiden to the king. I wish you good luck.”

So the king’s son hollowed out the potato, and put the toad inside. As soon as he had done so, the toad became a maid, and the potato became a coach. Tais kissed the maid, and they left.

Again, Amiaivel sat and awaited the pixie. But she did not come. Many weeks he waited, until finally somebody came. This time it was Tais.

“Thou hast shown me immense kindness,” he said. “Because of thee, I have become king. In thanks, I would like to help thee,” he continued. “A pixie told me that thou beest my uncle, locked in a toad’s body by the late King Nosch. So I have found a good witch, who gave me this potion to heal you. Alas, she could not make enough to save thy housemaids.”

Amiaivel swallowed the potion, and instantly became human, still as young as he had been when he was enchanted. He went up to the palace, and was taken to Puzchunza, and given Bella’s engagement band. “Since this is the lady thou lovest the most, she will be thy wife.”

At once Amiaivel began to sob. “I lied. She is but my maid. My fiancée is still a toad! Oh, if only I had not been so selfish!” With that, Amiaivel dashed back into his cave, and found the middle pieces of potato which had been left behind. He massaged Bella with them, and soon she became human. But alas, not enough potato was left. She still had one leg like that of a toad, and skin pocked with boils. But she was still his beloved.

Amiaivel helped his fiancée to the palace, and soon they wed. Tais had fallen in love with Puzchunza, and was glad that she was not, in fact, Amiaivel’s fiancée. Those two also wed, and the two couples united to lead the kingdom with wisdom exceeding that of any single king.





I first heard about swallows in the fairy tale Thumbelina. Since then I have heard about swallows in many other situations, and I get the impression that in fairy tale land they’re about as common as sparrows.

I visited fairy tale land in 2004, and moved there in 2005, so now I have seen many other fairy tale creatures and objects in Canada and Switzerland: chipmunks, beavers, squirrels, bears, groundhogs, foxes, castles, snow, poppies. But I have yet to see a swallow. Yesterday I saw a flock of birds which the friends I was with called swallows, but when I checked with my book about such birds, I came to the conclusion they were probably common swifts.

Still, I’m fairly certain that I’m living in a fairy tale now. I think once I finally see a real swallow, the only thing left to do will be to turn into a princess. Or perhaps I’ll meet a princess and turn into a swallow. In Towards Another Summer, Janet Frame‘s loosely autobiographical character Grace defines herself as a migrating bird.

I thought about writing a tongue-in-cheek self-referential fairy tale about my own life, but I couldn’t think of a villain. So I read the fairy tale section of the Geneva Writers’ Group leader Susan Tiberghian‘s book, One Year to a Writing Life. The first exercise is to read her version of The Three Feathers, and write a journal entry imagining oneself as one of the characters. I imagined myself as the toad, and realised that the story could be much more interesting from his point of view. So that’s the story I wrote.

I think it makes a lot more sense than the original. The moral has something to do with trust, kindness, and self-sacrifice; if you trust people and pixies, even when they have lied to you in the past, you will be rewarded. The original… well, I’m not sure what the moral of that is. Is it, ‘sometimes, what you’re looking for is right in front of you’, or is it ‘you don’t need intelligence to become the ruler of a country, you just need to be friends with some powerful toads.’ I don’t like to make political statements…

There is plenty of room for adjusting the happiness of the ending. Perhaps Amiaivel could be trusting and generous enough to save Bella with the potato and give her to Tais. Perhaps he’d still give him Pazchunza, but since he’d been so kind up until then and never got anything in return, they’d somehow find a way to revive all of the toads. Or perhaps he would not be able to save Bella at all, and have to visit her every day in the dungeon. It’s up to you.

I got the fairy-tale-like names from my French-Rumantsch Ladin dictionary. Amiaivel means something similar to ‘kind’, Nosch mean, Bella beautiful, Tais something like ‘stupid’ (although the French to Rumantsch section of the dictionary was strangely lacking in words to express this.) Puzchunza means housemaid. We can imagine that King Nosch called his son stupid simply because he’s not a very nice guy.

In case you missed it (and I hope you did) the entire fairy tale is a lipogram (or should I say lipogam?), without the letter R. I hope that the only place where this is obvious is on Tais’s fourth visit, where he realises that Amiaivel is his uncle and thus addresses him with the familiar ‘thou‘, avoiding a few Rs in the process. Perhaps this switch to Middle English doesn’t match the language in the rest of the story. Perhaps a prince addressing the man who should be king should not use it, even if it is his uncle. Perhaps I’ve used the wrong declension of it in parts. Perhaps it was lazy of me to switch to ‘thou’ instead of rephrasing the dialogue. I thought it would be fun.

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  1. #1 by A meri ca on July 9, 2008 - 9:44 am

    Cinderella turned fairy? that’s why I love fairy tales as they always give hope for the future….good things do come like a trip to fairy land… even the randy Italian had some interest!


  2. #2 by Susan Tiberghien on July 14, 2008 - 1:30 pm

    Bravo, Amiavil!!
    Thank you Angela,


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